Wednesday, September 13, 2006

To be with you...

I wrote this one long back.....

Its been years and the journey so long,
But to see you, I will travel all along.

The mere thought of you makes me glow
You are all the beauty, nature could show.

Over the mountains across the oceans,
A journey past many endurance.

Summer, winter or be it any season,
To be with you I have all the reasons.

Neither for Rita, nor for Sita or even the sexy Maria.
I just want to get back to you, My India.

14 comments:

Rajesh said...

idhukku nee ezhudhamaiye irundhurkalam. Just kidding!

vishy said...

Rajesh.. aah haa..

instant reply aah.. aga mothathula asusual otitinga..

வேதா said...

apdiye pularachi pochu po:)orey peelings of india:)

prachi said...

we love our india....

dakaltiz said...

hey vishy ... figeru ra pathi thaan kooviriyo nu nenachean... ;)nice 1... thanks for droppin by my blog da..keep coming..

Usha said...

ooi, Mother India-va Miss India-va? over scene udambukagadhu!

Ajay said...

nee than unmayana Indhian...

mystery said...

adengappa...over build up a irrukku...hehe..good one tho

Known Stranger said...

yappa enna orru pattru.. jai hind

Known Stranger said...

na na n an ana annnn nannnnriii thallaivaa

Schrodingers cat said...

Good suff...but to give you a honest critique, the last two lines dint quite fit in.

Broken arrow was awesome.

M.

vishy said...

M. thanks for your honest opinion.. get that from very few.. but the last two lines do not fit it.. yes.. did not initially intend to finish it this way.. and hence so..

vibhor said...

how beautifully you have relate mother
india...
nice attempt..

Anonymous said...

so you moving back to india?