Sleepless nights and days so unpleasant
The gusty past chokes the Present.
Hiding those thoughts in misty a haze
I just smoke to my own disgrace.
Killing the desires I no more crave
I just dig my own grave.
To burn thy memoirs forever
I just lit my funeral pyre.
And yet you arise like a Phoenix from my ashes.
37 comments:
Nice one...
First time here...
I dabble at poetry too :)You can find some of them in my blog!
ennamo po..athu eppadi unakku mattum kavithaiya varthu....good one tho...
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hey...super:)
WWWWWWWWOOOOOWWWW.....first time here...super poetry...ithey linesa tamizhla padicha nyabagam...aiyo...copy adicheenganu solala...my frnd had posted similar thots in tamil in his post...
ennamo po..adhu eppadidhan idhe madhiri ezhudara, aana onnum illa-nu kadhai udariyo
Usha...
adhu ennavo... enna mayamo theriyala... ellam oru flow la varathu dhan...
Awesome post... :)
On an unrelatd subject am blogrolin u with ur permision :)
Alo..Yetho matter iruku.. Yenna vishayam???
Dont you think you have some rather- tamil responses for a "swoober" english powem?!
So, mys resbwans will be in kood enklish:
I think the title is an oxymoron, there is no eternality in love..other than that.. good poem..my fav line is
"The gusty past chokes the Present."
very true - you spoke like me. it is a with respect to . Actually i am not standing either side of fence but veiwing it from above it two people on either side of fence with their love nailed in fence
hi vishy,
very nicely wrtten
espacially the last line...
reborn with my own ashes..
Stunning in its simple beauty...loved it!!!!
when do you plan to update? it's been too long :)
Sathyama I didnot send the link in the previous comment.
kavidhai ellam podhum edhavadhu kara sarama eludhu let us argue...
kavidhai ellam podhum edhavadhu kara sarama eludhu lets argue...
wow... thelast linge
yes naan dhan link potten. Annikki konjam jaasthi kudichen. Adhunala marandhuten.
hey after a long time here....Superb :)
Hope alls well with u!
good one...keep em comming
hello, is this blog still alove
alive, that is
Usha the blogs been dead for a while... got busy with other things..will be bk soon
Long time no c??? How r tings @ ur end?? ?
Good one!
"Killing the desires I no more crave
I just dig my own grave." I identify with this ...
The last line is so powerful ...
what a way to end such a lovely poem!
GBU
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Beautiful. Is the writing in Sanskrit?
Veda
very nice..
Your article is very informative and helped me further.
Thanks, David
wonderful lines da vishy....good 1.
i'm here after a long time dude...
nice going..
Man I love your poems. Very thought out, where do you draw your inspiration from? Are these based on true story? Or are they just made up? Either way, absolutely amazing, I've got your blog bookmarked. I'd love to talk to you personally sometime about your poems, because these are, well, just too good to just say, "Hey good job." You seem like a cool guy is all, lol. Anyways, drop me a message at thorax232@yahoo.com I'd really appreciate it. I would also love to set up an official interview for my blog, as cheesy as it sounds I can promise I'd make something out of it. A friend of mine is a huge poem fanatic, he's in the Gamer Advisory Panel (think tank for Sony) and even though I quit I've still got my old pass. Anyways, I'd appreciate just the opportunity to talk. =D
i think you need to rise from ashes one more time to give life to this page
aaa aaaaa aaaaaaa kavithe kavithe !!!!!!
lolzzzzzzzz.... jus kiddin....
came frm ur heart ah?
manasula irundhu aruvi maadhiri oothudhu pola.. great lines.
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