Yet another poem as requested by my fellow bloggers...
ho Alas, it's finally broken....
They came and they went
trying to pull it away.
But then I was so strong
and nothing went wrong.
So many times
it tried to pop off.
Yet to vein,
I put their attempts.
And then she came,
a beautiful dame.
There was no fight,
but just a single sight.
And I lost it to her.
But then, I did not fear.
I did'nt know how it happened,
for the loss,I was'nt disheartened.
But soon life was a mess,
yet I stayed calm, without making any fuss.
I had lost it without my knowledge,
and My love she did not acknowledge.
She came and she went.
Now in my heart, there is a dent.
Neither she stole it nor was it stolen,
but my Love, now its rotten.
oh alas, it's finally broken.. My Heart.
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17 comments:
whoa..another failure...but well written..
udaindhada idhayam...
yennachu da, who is it this time?
I liked the title the best.
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The search has just begun !!!
good one vishy...now something more cheerful pls
good one vishy, aana ipadi engipisla ezuthina mathiri konjam tamila try panunga:)
Ajay: hmm yov ..ezhudhina.. failure nu solra.. illa na ezhuthala nu solra..
Sreeram: eppovum yarum illa da.. ellam oru flow la varathu dhan..
Random access: dei appo title ku apporom did u not read the rest of the poem.. :))
Ashok: hmm cheerful.. edhavathu workout aachuna dhan.. "ippadi ezhuthi appdiye oru sympathu wave create pannalam nu try pannaren :))"
Veda: okie done.. next ungalukkaaga Tamzhil la ezhudharen.. but it will be in tanglish..
i been to the shop of patti. but very bad taste.. heiehei.. she enquired you a lot.. it seems you left lot of credit to her.
ezhudittaya kadaiseela..adhu en sogamave ezhudara? Ajay saapadu andha alavuku affect panradha enna? ;) Ajay, no offence, nee super-a samaikarayam
Hmm..pretty good this.
Soon, u'll find the next one.
Tch! Tch! good to see that cupid's arrow is also broken with your heart! So, new arrows, new targets and a new plaster! life!
btw, replied to your comment on my blog. Take a look. I loved your blog title too!
Kavide Kavide... cool man... keep going... BTW who is she???
Dinks.. dei blog update pannu da..
Usha: yep.. ezhudhitten.. en sogamave ezhuthura nu ketta enna solla.. ellam oru flow la ezhutharathu dhan..
SimblyDimply.. read ur replies.. will try to listen to those ...
well new arrows.. ne plasters.. new targets.. well every thing seems viscious.
sundar.. vada magane va.. "eva ava" nu vedivelu mari keta.. kavidahi sonna..anubhavikkanum.. araya koodathu..
Apt title and good lines. Sometimes the lesson is more important the result ! Good stuff mate !
First time visit to your blog. Nice and touching poem. But romba naala enku oru chinna doubt. How can a heart break? It all happens in our mind only?
hello mr. vishi...
nothing last forever..
so will also find someone who is only for u and u....
take care
--mojindro
u are as slower as i am it seems
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