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En Vazhvil ini Oli Veesum
Endrenrum en Iniyavale.
"Contact Lens" unakku NANRI hai.
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kazhatti vechu paartha,
kezhaviyum kumariyai thondrum.
pottundu paartha,
unmai swaroopam theriyum.
hi vishy,
aaha enna oru kavidhai. climax lines super.
"mangalai therinda en kadhali
thelivai therinthal,
kannadi potta piragu"
how is this?
Kanngalaal kavizhndhai
Kaatrile Midandhai
Kondadi Magizhndhai
Keetrai Uraindhai
Kaneerile Karaindhai
Kaanamal Maraindhai
Kumariyal Udaindhai
Kavithaiyai pozhindhai
If you love someone, you either give them up, or lose them.
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veda:
super.. adding more to what u wrote:
mangalai therinda en kadhali
thelivai therinthal..
kannadi potta piragu..
annal athu varai thelivai iruntha en kadhal
enno inru mangalagi vittathu..
Ra..
nalla sokka than ezhuthi irukka.. ana enkku sila lines ( para 1 line 4) artham puriyalai..
and last line.. if you love some one.. why shld u lose or give them up... u can also win their love.. I did'nt get wht made u say tht.. u got J rite??
kavithai...kavithai..enge padi...
@ hi vishy,
//annal athu varai thelivai iruntha en kadhal
enno inru mangalagi vittathu..//
appo unga kadalukum oru contact lens pottu vittudunga.
Rajesh..
actually intha kalathulla.. ellarum face la avalo patti adichukittu varanga.. so face wash panna dhan unmai swaroopan theriyum...
Veda..
naama lens pottu focus panrathukulla..
ava innoruthana focus pannita!!! :))
"appo unga kadalukum oru contact lens pottu vittudunga"..
naa etho summa rendu vari sethu ezhuthinen avalothan.. neega vera oru kadhali ya attachment pannidathinga..
Ada ada ada, ore kavignar-gala irukeenga pola naatla!! Oru contact lens-ku kavidhai ezhudina vishy vazhga!
Dei,
When matter freezes, it shrinks da. So if I say "shrunk like a stick", it does makes sense...oru mechanical payyanukku theriya vendaama?
Anywayz, think abt the last line da, it does makes sense. We are but temporal beings da... What comes, has to go.. sometime.. (thalaivare sollirkaar)
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Usha,
ennkku kavignan nu pattam sooti thappu pannitinga.. innum pala athiradi kavithagalukku kathirungal.. :))
Ra,
na chemical engr da.. I still do not get the meaning of
"Kumariyal Udaindhai
Kavithaiyai pozhindhai"
do you mean to say I was boken by a gal..
Good one! Liked the third stanza the best.
@ ajay.. dei vishwa itha padanuma ;-).....
@vishwa ..kalakitta po... unakulla thoongi iruntha mirugatha thattttti ezyupitta da
ella thambi:
romba nalla irukuleee
keep it IN
-kurudan-
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